Misfits, the

silver bonds and golden chains
the glamor’s gone but the scars remain
you’re building up your diamond wings
smudgin that black coal on more important things

and i’m sayin

we all want to be
the prettiest puzzle piece
feeling loved, feeling free
but still fitting in our place

while we build our walls
of sparkles and crystal balls
we continue to age
as the bird in the golden cage

now what?
basically the song is about how the more stuff we get, the more value we take in appearance and the material things of life, the more we bind and limit ourselves. but i’m stuck! poo

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not to sound mean but the next thing you need to do is tear it up!

It honestly dont make much sense, and your rhymes are a little to elementary.

I like this..But

silver bonds and (golden chains after your16 we call it a necklace)
the glamor’s gone but the scars remain

I dont like this

you’re building up your diamond "R"ings
smudgin that black coal on more important things

we know coal makes diamonds but the song you are looking to write doesnt fit what you are writing

How about something like this

silver bonds and diamond rings
the glamour’s gone but the scars remain
she lost all her precious things
But she cant lose her memories

Now rethink the chorus! good luck

Kevin S | Feb 25, 2008

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maybe if I heard the tune, just reading the lyrics leaves me wondering what the point is.
itchianna | Feb 25, 2008

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No idea, but try googlin it, usually works for me.
Elizabeth | Feb 25, 2008

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I really like that song, I think that it is really good. Sorry but I’m not sure what else to add to it. I just wanted to say that it is really good, and don’t give up on it.
way2cutu | Feb 25, 2008

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The sequins have all turned a dull shade of grey
You can shine them up, but it wont last the day
without some aesthetic appreciation
for what lights your way
When you go out tonight, don’t forget to keep count
and as the shrouds fall away have you made your mark

(now im stuck too. Hope this helps)
mizzeldar | Feb 25, 2008